Forever (Immortal, #2)

Forever (Immortal, #2) More of the same with misspellings and punctuation errors, although not as bad as the first one.Forever picks up where the previous book left off The last book ended with Alina waking up with amnesia which started the Samuel Duncan engagement confusion Before her amnesia she told her father and Tabby that she was engaged to Samuel Grant and later told her father it was Duncan Eventually she introduces Samuel to her father, neither brought up the fact she was engaged to Samuel Duncan and now in a relationship Samuel damn, what a mess It annoyed me that she or no one could put it together that she was engaged to Samuel and or Duncan This part of the story was all over the place Duncan continues to spice up the story as a sometimes villain hero His love for Alina pushes him to be her protector but he still makes you wonder if he can be trusted Sometimes I find myself rooting for him because he seems lovelorn, and broken hearted Samuel is Alina s constant protector He doesn t talk much about what s bothering him or what he s thinking I root for him mostly because Lily chose Duncan but lost her and I worry that Alina is going to break his heart I also noticed that she never really introduces Samuel as her boyfriend, he s always a friend from school Not sure if that s telling on her future choice or what.The story is actually really good and strays from the expected The characters continue to add depth and feeling It s packed with action and surprises The next book should be even better by clearing up the story lines and proper editing. Like most who read the first installment of Immortal, I really looked forward to reading the second book, however in the end I was a little disappointed In my view the second book lacked character development and I found I didn t really care about the relationships this time around The action kept the book going and I was intrigued by the plot lines, yet towards the end the twists didn t really make sense and at the end of the book I felt confused. What Are We Playing For An Evil Grin Spread Over His Face I Am So Glad You Asked We Re Playing For The Chance To Choose Choose What Where My Next Shot Goes Memories Fade, Betrayals Abound, And Death Looms Alina Believed Becoming An Immortal Would Protect Those She Loved, But How Can She Protect Them When They Re Already Caught In The Trap Second Book In The Immortal Trilogy My review was originally posted on my blog Dive Under the CoverI am going to keep this short and spoiler freeThis book was much better than the last one as far as editing goes I saw a couple of typos, things like that, but overall it was much smoother.As far as the story goes, this one pretty much takes up right where the first one left off I think that the story line is a little jerky and seems to be all over the place There are twists and turns, but they don t flow quite as smoothly as they should Alina s character, well all the characters really, are all over the place throughout the whole story Are they good Are they bad I still don t know where everyone stands I know that Alina loves Samuel, but she can turn on a dime and be kissing Duncan I don t like that at all I don t mind a little tension, but I don t like that she is so flaky I don t think she really knows what she wants and she is way too quick to trust all of them.This one just ends in the middle of the story It may seem like the logical place to stop, but it s really quite abrupt and I didn t care for that at all.I would recommend this for those who read the first book It really is much better than the first one and it s still a little too similar to Twilight for my taste, but the idea is a good one I just wish she had worked harder to make it a little original I would have rated it much higher in that case.This is a YA story, there isn t much warning needed with this one There is no description of anything beyond kissing Everything else is done in cut to the next scene fashion. Good book, not as good as the gist book But that book was amazing so it would be hard to top Looking forward to book three Bring it on Loved this book Some twists that I truly did not expect Definitely kept me on my toes, I couldn t put it down til I finished it Now I m right back where I started dying for the next book This book really took me for a ride Expect the unexpected, and don t be surprised that Burd will throw you a twist here and there I liked Book 1 and 2 for different reasons 1 was for the drama between the love triangle and mysteries, while 2 was for the action and twists In this book, I didn t like how it started off, but it ended up growing on me.The beginning was really disappointing at first Book 1 had left us with a crazy cliffhanger, and I went crazy wondering what was going to happen next view spoiler You re left with this scenario that Aliana woke up not remember who she was, and Duncan tricks her into caring for him and convinces her that Samuel is the enemy hide spoiler The writing still hasn t improved, but I can see where the author wanted to go with the story It was a good idea, but it wasn t carried out well I m going to begin with the characters Their relationship appeared only shallow I didn t feel anything deep It was the same with the characters themselves To me, they weren t living, breathing beings More time and effort needed to be expanded on their character development.As for the plot, it was very messy Certain areas needed to be tightened up, some expanded on, some cut out, some completely rewritten, and a lot of it rearranged All of these changes need to be applied to the first book as well It s as though the author was deciding to go in one direction throughout the first book, and suddenly decided to switch her goals in this book It leaves for a complicated mess The way she set up the relationships between the characters, I m not sure where she was going with that either The thriller portion of this book the hunt and chase was used to hide the lack of development in other areas of the book I suggest that the author read some YA books, not thriller Just simple fiction There is no chasing, no murders, no evil plots, just a simple plot Those books have heavy emphasis on the portrayal of the emotions and relations of the main character The other characters in the book feel real as well This book was missing those aspects.I would recommend the author to go through her immortals series as though it were one large book, and re evaluate what she wants to show through this story What should we, the readers, take away from this Because, frankly, I didn t get anything If properly edited, it could be a major hit. This is the second book in this series and after I finished the first one I couldn t wait for this to come out.and I was pretty disappointed I feel like even though it seemed like things were going on, not much happened in the development of the characters, hopefully the next book will make up for that. Mrs Lauren Burd just posted on her blog that the book comes out tentatively on December 1st 2011

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  • Kindle Edition
  • 290 pages
  • Forever (Immortal, #2)
  • Lauren Burd
  • English
  • 05 July 2019

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